TAKING FLIGHT

If you like cartoons or made up stories you will like taking flight . if you like staying home making no connections with anyone. Well spending time with family is more important. Do you like going outside doing stuff like fighting monkeys, being silly,having fun. It doesn't matter what age you are you can have fun in every way. This video is about a boy who wanted to play with his dad but his dad had to leave so he went to his. Him and his Grandad went on heaps of funny and crazy adventures. I give this a 2 out of 5 it wasn’t intreating for me, and also I think it is suitable for 2 to 9 years old.

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                                               Ocean Pollution

Stop,stop people, poor sea animals are losing their sweet life from our disgusting harmful waste.We,Together, we can stop pollution right now.The less waste the better!! This issue needs to be addressed. So it starts here: Since the 1940s, plastic use has increased. There are a few things that is taking sea life away like:drinking cans containers and that includes  plastic bottles,chemical containers heaps of of chemicals,bleach bottles and plastic bags.

Scientist and environmental groups since 1980s have more closely addressed the problem and how it affects on public health and wildlife. We know that cargo ships and cruise liners had dumped 14 billion pounds of garbage into the ocean. Over1 million seabirds and 1 million sea mammals are killed by pollution each year. Do you see how bad its getting.

Over the past few decades human activities have affected of the life in earth's oceans. We are spreading harmful used things like oil, Plastic, Harmful waste and chemical particles into the ocean. The ocean is dying because of this. Come on people, How would you feel if people dumped garbage in your garden or on your land. How would you feel?

Supermarkets are trying to get rid of use of plastic bags and make people bring their own bags instead. Use the boxes that the food comes in like come on! Make sure we all dispose of pollution Properly.” look, Stop there's  a bin over there, Put it in there instead of dropping it on the ground!”

“ Why is it going to matter”

So I hope you have learned more about pollution and go home and warn your parents about pollution and try to maxim waste not to make waste. Hope you have learned about scientist and environmental groups, and what cargo ships and cruise liners were doing, and what happened in the past that is still happening. Also the chemical and plastic and more is going into our environment and seas and oceans. Literally it's you're choice, do you want to let poor animals die because of waste well it's your choice make it good because animals are DYING!!!

Dear Mr Winston Peters

We have been thinking to help you choose who you pick.I recomend Labour/Greens.Here are a few reasons why.

Clean Rivers

We are getting people to pay tax to help get people cleaning the rivers in different areas in taranaki and new zealand. We don't have to swim in duck poo.

Maternity

Labour is a big help to ladies to get money while they are having babies. here's an example, my teacher has a wife who is soon going to have a baby,and people having a baby should and i mean should get payed even if they're not working,like come on,am I the only one who wants to help people or what come on!!!!!!

Lower house price

Labour is helping the homeless people get homes and lowing the home's rate down for young people to afford the price and will not have to live on the street at a young age.

So please pick labour. It will be a smart move to help the homeless people off the street and into houses,help women get paid while giving birth,and to clean up rivers so we can swim in them.

     A cooking cinasanal

          Masterpeace

On the 11th of September on Monday,at the stratford primary school hall,there was a magnificent smell.The hall was decorated to the highest point.It was so fancy.Each group had to cook for 20 people.The tables were beautiful each with unique appearances.The main was delicious it was called tartiflette,it had cheese,bacon and  mashed potato “It was very good”said Brendon Watkins. “It was very very good give my thanks to the chefs” said Miss Rova. The service was great it was fast. We got everything very very fast.It was good for the people that had to go early. For dessert it was chocolate mousse it was delicious it was filled with white ice-cream and chocolate underneath with coffee it was lovely,my most favourite part of all dishes.tables had a comfy seating and there was a lovely set-up.the appearances were lovely too,it was like a feal cafe ,it was amazing.It was lovely because each table was different.The French Flamingos table had a picture of  the eiffel tower on the back wall.There placemats match their country.The end glasses were different to the ones in bertwin. It was a awesome change.

Written By Hannah Watkins

    FATHER'S DAY

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Today was fathers day,had to wait 2 hours before waking up Daddy. Me MUm and Michael continued watching the sound of music but Michael didn't watch the first bit because he was at my Aunt's house. (Claire and Hilary).MIchaels presents were a New Zealand vs Australia connect 4 and a pair of batman underwear also a packet of chocolate but I got him a Dane Coles pepsi and an alien movie that I never want to watch and a box of rose chocolates.Then we got dressed and got in the car

We drove to Deluxe dinner  but before I talk about the food we went to number 1s shoes to buy some new school shoes and running shoes and Bradon's for Mum P.S its a women shop.Now to Deluxe dinner!!!! Me and Michael had curly fries and chicken tenders. Mum and Dad had different burgers.

After lunch we went to pak'nsave and brought the groceries before we went home. We Watched wonder women the new movie had tea and went to bed for a good night rest before monday

                                               My sore hip

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It was a dark,and cold night. Mum was in bed along with Dad and Michael. All of a sudden something is sore,in my hip. At the time thinking it will go away in a few minutes. 2 minutes later. It’s still there it’s getting sorer and SoReR and SORER. I was sobbing. I roared “MUM,” she woke up, and asked “what’s wrong.” I tried to stop crying so I could speak. Finally I calmed down. There was still tears running down my face. “It's my hip.” I pointed out.then we went to the hospital.in a ambulance.

TO THE HOSPITAL

I went into a ward. After a few days, later we went home and came back and forth until...They explained…”We will not let you leave until we have found an answer Okay” promised the doctor. “Ok!” we continued.

THE SORE HIP

I kept waking up in the night. My hip hurts like crazy. I got put in a wheelchair, Because it was getting worse. I felt like dying because the pain was so bad.

PUT IN HOSPITAL

I got put in hospital for a month. The pain was unbearable.I got a bit surprised when four of my friends came to visit me. They  got me a lot of  presents from them. I got fake flowers from my friend Amy, Cupcakes from Mason and a comfy pillow from Mazy. My hip was getting better day my day.

Purpose: Not having a crazy dog

Audience: Pet owners

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Title: How to train your dog

Do you have a dog? Have you seen or had a crazy dog? Well heres how to train your  dog. Materials you will need

Dog treats

A small ball ( that the dog can catch the ball and you can throw it )

A lead

A dog house

A mat  ( for the dog house )

Blankets ( for the dog house )

Cones ( to make a track )

Gloves ( so you don’t get dog spit all over you )

Pats ( so you can pat the Purpose: Not having a crazy dog

Firstly, start by putting on the gloves and set up the cones so they look like a race track. Now get the dog lead and put that on the dog. Also set up the dog house put the mat in and set up the blankets so the dog sleep somewhere.

Secondly, start walking the track then keep doing the track until you and the dog get up to run ( around the track ). Then tell it to sit,roll over and lay down, also make sure you tell it to do all those things at the end to see if the dog is doing it. Then if the dog was good then give it a treat.

Next start throwing the ball and tell the dog to get it and bring it back.Once the dog does bring it back take the ball and throw a treat and give the dog a pat.Once it is night put the dog in the dog house and put the blankets over top but don’t cover his or her head.

Finally, wake up and do it all over again and see if the dog is good or not this time. Then give it a treat and you're done you have a fully trained dog.