FATHER'S DAY

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Today was fathers day,had to wait 2 hours before waking up Daddy. Me MUm and Michael continued watching the sound of music but Michael didn't watch the first bit because he was at my Aunt's house. (Claire and Hilary).MIchaels presents were a New Zealand vs Australia connect 4 and a pair of batman underwear also a packet of chocolate but I got him a Dane Coles pepsi and an alien movie that I never want to watch and a box of rose chocolates.Then we got dressed and got in the car

We drove to Deluxe dinner  but before I talk about the food we went to number 1s shoes to buy some new school shoes and running shoes and Bradon's for Mum P.S its a women shop.Now to Deluxe dinner!!!! Me and Michael had curly fries and chicken tenders. Mum and Dad had different burgers.

After lunch we went to pak'nsave and brought the groceries before we went home. We Watched wonder women the new movie had tea and went to bed for a good night rest before monday