My sore hip

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It was a dark,and cold night. Mum was in bed along with Dad and Michael. All of a sudden something is sore,in my hip. At the time thinking it will go away in a few minutes. 2 minutes later. It’s still there it’s getting sorer and SoReR and SORER. I was sobbing. I roared “MUM,” she woke up, and asked “what’s wrong.” I tried to stop crying so I could speak. Finally I calmed down. There was still tears running down my face. “It's my hip.” I pointed out.then we went to the hospital.in a ambulance.

TO THE HOSPITAL

I went into a ward. After a few days, later we went home and came back and forth until...They explained…”We will not let you leave until we have found an answer Okay” promised the doctor. “Ok!” we continued.

THE SORE HIP

I kept waking up in the night. My hip hurts like crazy. I got put in a wheelchair, Because it was getting worse. I felt like dying because the pain was so bad.

PUT IN HOSPITAL

I got put in hospital for a month. The pain was unbearable.I got a bit surprised when four of my friends came to visit me. They  got me a lot of  presents from them. I got fake flowers from my friend Amy, Cupcakes from Mason and a comfy pillow from Mazy. My hip was getting better day my day.